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Approaching Curve

May 27, 2009
By tori14 BRONZE, Oneida, Illinois
tori14 BRONZE, Oneida, Illinois
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Darkness over takes our tears
losing her is our biggest fear

Tears that are shed
as we are told one is dead

Feelings remain unknown
for those we've never shown

people rise and people fall
but we will remember them all

All the laughs he shared
will now keep in prayer

As one dies
we all cry

bringing us closer together
as we say goodbye forever

The author's comments:
Written for some classmates that just recently got in a car accident and one got killed and the other is in ICU

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Nata said...
on Feb. 11 2010 at 4:08 pm
Beautiful! Very sad, but beautiful....

tori14 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 18 2009 at 3:40 pm
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