what have i done

November 25, 2008
By Anonymous

wait hold up i dont know what to do

i keep sinking and sinking. i think im falling through

the ground slips beneath me all i see is black

darkness engulfs me

its cold

the air full of despair

its hard to breath

so hard to breath the cold air of despair

im all alone


please release me from this cage. i want to live but i dont know why

then a voice calls to me "then i cant see why"

what have i done?

The author's comments:
i lost my reason to live. as for the details why id rather not say. i had a dream where i fell and i was asked why i had lost such a will.i didnt know what to say so he told me if i didnt have a reason, not one, then i shouldnt live at all. he was right, so i told him my reason to live is to find my reason to live.then i woke up i learned a very valuable lesson from this all life is worth living find that reason

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on Jun. 3 2009 at 12:46 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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I'm sorry that you had felt so miserable but it's good to see that you can write it out and I hope it helped. It is a pretty good poem there and I think you should keep writing. I also hope you've found your reason to continue living


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