The true mind.

May 25, 2009
By Matthew Stewart BRONZE, Vancouver, Washington
Matthew Stewart BRONZE, Vancouver, Washington
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Why try, we all die?
Why cry, just stand there and sigh?
Look to the stars a wonder why.
Look to your mind and wander away.
Find the place you would love to stay.
Open your mind see what you'll find.
Keep searching, you must find what is lurking.
Is it love is it death what could possibly be in the secret chest.
Let your mind be blown let the true you be shown.
Wander through the dark hall, dont worry just stand up tall.
Listen for the blackbirds call just try not to fall.
Search your mind far, you have time but time only so far.
will you find yourself or be lost afar.
Will you be left Searching and searching destined to never find what is lurking?
Listen for the music, very high and acoustic.
Its a epic battle your mind versus your mind you must find the weakness to keep yourself alive.

The author's comments:
Its about battling your own mind to find your own weakness to get you farther in life. Its my second piece I'm working on getting better. Advice is appreciated.

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on Jun. 1 2009 at 12:07 am
The_Madcap GOLD, Vancouver, Washington
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This one is great man! It has the elements that anyone who wishes to better themselves need. It has a farout rhyming scheme that rhymes in the same line - yet sometimes it doesnt. Plus its plot is something that we can all understand.




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