Controlled

May 25, 2009
By vamppoet16 SILVER, Hayden, Alabama
vamppoet16 SILVER, Hayden, Alabama
7 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If i tell you I love you, can I keep you forever?"


People are controlling
turning you into a
complete stranger
you're their work of art
molded, sculpted, painting
falseness
right on your face
People are selfish
thinking of who they want
you to be
never asking your opinion
never wondering who you
want to be
never even caring
People are hypicritical
they say it's you being
controlling
selfish and careless
when it's always them but
do you dare argue?
You want to fight them off
these controlloing,
selfish, hypicritical
people
tell them where to go
But when it's someone you
truely love
can you do just that?



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on Sep. 15 2009 at 7:16 pm
vamppoet16 SILVER, Hayden, Alabama
7 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If i tell you I love you, can I keep you forever?"

thank you. that means a lot coming from such a good writer as u.

on Sep. 13 2009 at 2:39 pm
emo.panda101 BRONZE, Fitchburg, Massachusetts
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iam the greatest dork!!

np your a great writer i love all ur work

on Sep. 13 2009 at 12:52 pm
vamppoet16 SILVER, Hayden, Alabama
7 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If i tell you I love you, can I keep you forever?"

this one is about my family. i cheated on you is about the guy im dating now. every and blank stare is about my ex. so is controlled a little. thanks for all the feedback

on Sep. 11 2009 at 8:14 pm
emo.panda101 BRONZE, Fitchburg, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
iam the greatest dork!!

sorry to ask but who is this person you always talk bout nd i really like this i can relate to it




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