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Controlled

People are controlling
turning you into a
complete stranger
you're their work of art
molded, sculpted, painting
falseness
right on your face
People are selfish
thinking of who they want
you to be
never asking your opinion
never wondering who you
want to be
never even caring
People are hypicritical
they say it's you being
controlling
selfish and careless
when it's always them but
do you dare argue?
You want to fight them off
these controlloing,
selfish, hypicritical
people
tell them where to go
But when it's someone you
truely love
can you do just that?



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emo.panda101 said...
Sept. 11, 2009 at 8:14 pm
sorry to ask but who is this person you always talk bout nd i really like this i can relate to it
 
vamppoet16 replied...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 12:52 pm
this one is about my family. i cheated on you is about the guy im dating now. every and blank stare is about my ex. so is controlled a little. thanks for all the feedback
 
emo.panda101 replied...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 2:39 pm
np your a great writer i love all ur work
 
vamppoet16 replied...
Sept. 15, 2009 at 7:16 pm
thank you. that means a lot coming from such a good writer as u.
 
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