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All I want is to let my spirit fly.
Fly fly away. Farther than the heavens.
Farther than the stars.
Fly all the way out to the ends of the universe,
Just to break free.
I want to let go of this pain,
Let go of the tears I hold back.
I only wish that I could.
I only wish that I could let my past go,
And forget all of the suffering.
Forget all the pain.
I want to be myself.
I want to dance recklessly,
Sing so loud that everyone hears.
Read until there is no book left,
Jump so high just to reach the sun.
I want to become someone that can hold their own.
Be courageous and brave.
Stand up for what they believe in.
I just want to be myself.




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kirbybug said...
May 19, 2010 at 2:37 pm:

WOW!!! thats all i can say!!!

i can relate i have felt this way many times and still do!!!

you r a great writer keep up the great work!!!!!

 
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Sunshine24/7 said...
Aug. 25, 2009 at 10:56 pm:
Wow. That's so pretty! :D Feel free to come look at my work and let me know what you think as well! thanks so much! and I really liked your work! :D
 
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xlacrossex22 said...
Aug. 23, 2009 at 3:29 am:
You are right about "Beauty of the Night" I knew something was wrong with it, but I just couldn't figure out what. I'll work on it. Thanks!
 
kirbybug replied...
May 19, 2010 at 2:51 pm :

i looked you up and read some of your stuff and to tell u the truth your awesome!!! your writing is great and you have inspiration i specailly liked your quote would you look up my stuff basic beliefs by kirby~bug?

 thanks!!!!

 
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xlacrossex22 said...
Aug. 1, 2009 at 5:04 am:
This poem really hit home with me. You can tell you really put yourself into the piece. You are a great writer. If you can find the time, try to look at some of my work. It would be really nice to get some feedback. Keep writing, you're really good!
 
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