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Your Heart Died

The words that were never spoken
Leave me alone and broken.
Stitch me up, leave a scar
We made it so far
For this, just for this
Now there’s no forgiveness.
I’m stranded in my lake of pain
Waiting for you to explain
Why you broke my heart
And tore us apart.
I’ll never understand just why’
Just let my broken heart cry
Until you disappear
Leaving me here
Wondering why
Your heart had to die.



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GoldenGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 18, 2009 at 8:25 pm:
wow, this is a nice poem. I'd love to hear it spoken instead of reading it off a page, I feel like there's more to this poem than just the words. I can see you have potential in writing, there's no question to that, but I wonder how much experience you've had? You sound young, full of emotion, and that's key in writing. The hardest part of writing a poem is delivering it the right way. your poems are heartbreakers that many teens can relate to, but that's a little bit of the pr... (more »)
 
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SilverDawn said...
Jun. 2, 2009 at 5:04 am:
Whoa, this is a really good emotional poem. Almost made me shed a tear there. I love the meaning and rhyming (I love couplets too!). I hope you feel better soon <3
 
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