May 24, 2009
By Eszebel BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
Eszebel BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
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as you leave me behind
for the last time
your hair catches the sunbeams just so
dazzling my eyes gold.
i turn away in grief,
it’s not like i wanted this,
wanted you,
you know,
it’s just,
you know, it’s just.

it’s just.

The author's comments:
I didn't write this about a...oh, what's a good word? A boyfriend? A lover? A crush? Nothing so trivial as that last, certainly. This was a friend that I loved unconditionally - transcendentally, I think, sometimes. And one day I threatened to leave, so she left first.

She came back, but you know, it was never the same.

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This article has 2 comments.

Sarriaka said...
on May. 31 2009 at 9:08 pm
Ooh, i like it!

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SarahFina94 said...
on May. 31 2009 at 8:39 pm
this is beautiful. the way it captures the lack of words to describe the situation. in words. the words i use to sum it up are "I love you..."

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