Falling Apart

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It's hard to stand up
When you realize you have no support
It's hard to sit down
When you have nothing to catch you

It's hard to think
When bad thoughts has taken over
It's hard to choose
When you don't know right from wrong

It's hard to smile
When the pain is pounding inside
It's hard to laugh
When all you do is cry

It's hard to believe
When you hear so many lies
It's hard to trust
When there's no one in which you can rely

It's hard to love
With a broken heart
It's hard to be strong
When you're falling apart





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JasmineG. said...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 7:54 pm
This was really a great poem..you have talent. :D
 
xBaByGiRrL22x said...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 2:13 pm
like usual,  incredible. i luvv this. def 1 of my favez ;))  plzz keep writing
 
alex9426 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 6:30 pm
this is really amazing. i loved the emotion. one suggestion: in the fourth stanze, maybe "on whom you can rely" rather than "in which"
 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 12:55 pm
Thank you. I will remember that.
 
hBaAnNnAaNhA said...
Jan. 24, 2010 at 8:25 am
i think everyone can relate to this, so emotional. its beautiful :)
 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 24, 2010 at 11:29 am
Thanks! :)]
 
robert This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 5:00 pm
Yeah, it really does; there is emotion held within this piece that i think most of us teens can relate to. Excellent work. 
 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 12:48 pm
Thank you Robert!
 
b.rai said...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 4:38 pm
i like this one much.:)
 
NascentNovelist This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 18, 2009 at 1:39 am
Your descriptions catch anyone off guard. The greif that is enveloped in this poem is real. I love it. I like reading something that brings out a little emotion in me. This piece certainly did that. It makes the reader remember a time in their life that they stood on shaky ground. Congrats on the emotion in this one.
 
xXxFallingTearsxXx said...
Jul. 2, 2009 at 5:31 am
wow, this poem is so great, i love it!!! awsome job :)
 
MariaMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 2, 2009 at 12:33 am
True.. I love this. You're very good at letting people understand something that most would have trouble describing.
 
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