Falling Apart

May 24, 2009
By ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac


It's hard to stand up
When you realize you have no support
It's hard to sit down
When you have nothing to catch you

It's hard to think
When bad thoughts has taken over
It's hard to choose
When you don't know right from wrong

It's hard to smile
When the pain is pounding inside
It's hard to laugh
When all you do is cry

It's hard to believe
When you hear so many lies
It's hard to trust
When there's no one in which you can rely

It's hard to love
With a broken heart
It's hard to be strong
When you're falling apart



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JasmineG. GOLD said...
on Jun. 2 2010 at 7:54 pm
JasmineG. GOLD, Lawrence, Massachusetts
11 articles 1 photo 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're in the present not the future. The only thing we can do now is listen to our hearts and pay for it later with the satisfaction of knowing we did something actually worthwhile." -Jasmine Garver

This was really a great poem..you have talent. :D

on Apr. 17 2010 at 2:13 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

like usual,  incredible. i luvv this. def 1 of my favez ;))  plzz keep writing

on Apr. 6 2010 at 12:55 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Thank you. I will remember that.

on Apr. 6 2010 at 12:48 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Thank you Robert!

on Apr. 5 2010 at 5:00 pm
robert3212 GOLD, Harlingen, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
The opportunities in life are that which takes us away from normality.

Yeah, it really does; there is emotion held within this piece that i think most of us teens can relate to. Excellent work. 

on Jan. 31 2010 at 6:30 pm
literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
23 articles 3 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we're going." Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls
"The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound." Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde

this is really amazing. i loved the emotion. one suggestion: in the fourth stanze, maybe "on whom you can rely" rather than "in which"

on Jan. 24 2010 at 11:29 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Thanks! :)]

on Jan. 24 2010 at 8:25 am
hBaAnNnAaNhA BRONZE, West Newbury, Massachusetts
3 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live the life you choose, not the life you're told.

i think everyone can relate to this, so emotional. its beautiful :)

b.rai DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 15 2009 at 4:38 pm
b.rai DIAMOND, College Station, Texas
79 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
you never really know what love is, until it breaks your heart.

i like this one much.:)

on Aug. 18 2009 at 1:39 am
NascentNovelist GOLD, Syracuse, Utah
15 articles 3 photos 15 comments
Your descriptions catch anyone off guard. The greif that is enveloped in this poem is real. I love it. I like reading something that brings out a little emotion in me. This piece certainly did that. It makes the reader remember a time in their life that they stood on shaky ground. Congrats on the emotion in this one.

on Jul. 2 2009 at 5:31 am
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
12 articles 0 photos 148 comments
wow, this poem is so great, i love it!!! awsome job :)

on Jun. 2 2009 at 12:33 am
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

True.. I love this. You're very good at letting people understand something that most would have trouble describing.




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