Atmospheric Pressure

May 24, 2009
By ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac


This atmosphere is filled with
Many different emotions
Full of love, full of hate
The main atmospheric pressure

Its amazing how people could
Overcome the force of this
Cloud, the strength of this
Pain, The wind of this rain,
The cry of these strains.

This world is filled with
Many different motives
Some of which may harm
The human race and some
That will benefit

Its funny how this
World was made of
Peace, made of streaks,
Made with peaks, then
Result in grief.

This room is filled with
A diversity or many people
Full of potential, full of
Crap...The two main priorities

Its strange how people
Could look one another
In the eyes and smile
Afterward, they may joke
A while

This heart is filled
With many different feelings
Full of love, full of care
Full of trust, my main focus.

Its funny how you could
Give your all to someone
That doesn't respect you.
Some that just don't give
A DAMN how you feel.

What a strange, funny, and
Amazing world we live in.
Full of love, full of hate
The main atmospheric pressure.


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on Apr. 12 2010 at 6:03 am
Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE, Baldwin, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"The poet ranks far below the painter in the representation of visible things, and far below the musician in that of invisible things. Why does the eye see a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination when awake?,"Leonardo da Vinci.

I like the part bout "giving your all to someone when they don't give a d***" cuz it's true that no one does give a d***

on Apr. 7 2010 at 12:48 pm
RonCame1993 SILVER, Farmington Hills, Michigan
9 articles 3 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
If I'm weird, what's normal?
Gullible isn't in the dictionary... (sad face)

I like how it flows and your second stanza is really good.

on Feb. 12 2010 at 9:31 pm
Crying_Tears SILVER, SL,UT, Utah
8 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am fond on pigs.
Dogs look up to us.
Cats look down.
Pigs treat us as equals.
-Winston Churchill

I like the "Give your all to someone" part. Cuz it's true and it is amazing that you could chizel a statue of a person with your teeth, and they would not give a damn to save their life.

on Jan. 31 2010 at 6:22 pm
literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
23 articles 3 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we're going." Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls
"The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound." Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde

i loved how this poem had a light, almost flippant tone and how contrasting the meaning is to the tone. it's really clever

on Nov. 7 2009 at 3:46 am
WrittenDestinee SILVER, Buckeye, Arizona
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What I do is not who I am, but if your fortunate enough to connect with who I am, you may benefit from what I do."

poemz on here n this 1 really stuck out to me..i love thee part where u state that this world is made of peace, streakz&with peakz, but ultimately result n grief...it jus showz how corrupt n yet beautiful thee world is>thus how corrupt but beautiful we as people are...i love it...thankz 4 thee commentz n keep me posted>.~CoCo

on Nov. 7 2009 at 2:02 am
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

Your word choice and flow, your opinion and attitude, just wonderful. You're a true poet. I'd love for you to criticize my work, truly.

on Jul. 25 2009 at 7:19 pm
I am compelled by this poem. The use of language, symbolism and the meaning expressed is far reaching...you have great talent and can truely reach people and engage them with this gift! Impressive! Thank you for sharing your gift with others. :)

on Jun. 2 2009 at 12:26 am
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

This is OK.. and true. i'm glad to see you tell the truth. You're very good with symbolism.


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