Ignorance Is Bliss

May 23, 2009
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You sweep across my face
Lift up my chin
Whisper so soft I can barely hear you.
Even though I can't make out the words
I can tell every syllable is important.
You have that effect on me.
You brush your hand across my cheek
and you expose my inner secrets.
I dont want to hold back.
You are as loving and as gentle as you please.
You have that effect on me,
but I guess you can expect that from the breeze.

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bookhugger14 said...
Jun. 4, 2009 at 9:15 pm
i understood the meaning of this poem very well. good job!!! this poem worked well without rhyming and that can be hard to do sometimes :) thanks for commenting on my work!
DinosoarJen This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 29, 2009 at 9:05 pm
This is actually about a boy, not the breeze. Just a comparison. :]
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