Ignorance Is Bliss

May 23, 2009
By DinosoarJen DIAMOND, Scottsville, New York
DinosoarJen DIAMOND, Scottsville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Just another casualty.
It's sad but true.
And even dead I'm still ahead
of most of you.


You sweep across my face
Lift up my chin
Whisper so soft I can barely hear you.
Even though I can't make out the words
I can tell every syllable is important.
You have that effect on me.
You brush your hand across my cheek
and you expose my inner secrets.
I dont want to hold back.
You are as loving and as gentle as you please.
You have that effect on me,
but I guess you can expect that from the breeze.



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on Jun. 4 2009 at 9:15 pm
bookhugger14 SILVER, Delta, Ohio
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i understood the meaning of this poem very well. good job!!! this poem worked well without rhyming and that can be hard to do sometimes :) thanks for commenting on my work!

on May. 29 2009 at 9:05 pm
DinosoarJen DIAMOND, Scottsville, New York
86 articles 0 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just another casualty.
It's sad but true.
And even dead I'm still ahead
of most of you.

This is actually about a boy, not the breeze. Just a comparison. :]




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