May 23, 2009
By bookhugger14 SILVER, Delta, Ohio
bookhugger14 SILVER, Delta, Ohio
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my frilly, pink dress
bounced about with me
on the grassy, summer-filled hill
and I am so glad she had the will
because without her light softness
I would have been a mess
as we pranced about
we danced about
and I cannot go without
my frilly, pink dress
who will swim with me
through the rolling ocean waves
and make the tumbling rocks painfree
because I am happy to be
in my frilly, pink dress
so glad she can see
through the real mess
that is me.

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on Jan. 10 2010 at 2:58 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Its sweet and sort of delicate. I can picture the frilly, pink dress. Haha! good job.

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piratequeen said...
on Jun. 5 2009 at 8:49 pm
i can see myself in this poem! :]

on Jun. 3 2009 at 7:56 pm
DinosoarJen DIAMOND, Scottsville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Just another casualty.
It's sad but true.
And even dead I'm still ahead
of most of you.

I really like this. It's so simple and sweet. Even if you are a mess. I like how in some parts you rhymed without rhyming. Good stuff. :] I'd really appreciate it if you looked at some of my stuff. :]

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