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Frilly

my frilly, pink dress
bounced about with me
on the grassy, summer-filled hill
and I am so glad she had the will
because without her light softness
I would have been a mess
as we pranced about
we danced about
and I cannot go without
my frilly, pink dress
who will swim with me
through the rolling ocean waves
and make the tumbling rocks painfree
because I am happy to be
in my frilly, pink dress
so glad she can see
through the real mess
that is me.



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ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 2:58 am:
Its sweet and sort of delicate. I can picture the frilly, pink dress. Haha! good job.
If you have time, will you please check out my work? Comment nd rate if you wish. Thanks!
 
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piratequeen said...
Jun. 5, 2009 at 8:49 pm:
i can see myself in this poem! :]
 
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DinosoarJen This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 3, 2009 at 7:56 pm:
I really like this. It's so simple and sweet. Even if you are a mess. I like how in some parts you rhymed without rhyming. Good stuff. :] I'd really appreciate it if you looked at some of my stuff. :]
 
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