Best Friend, Worst Enemy

May 23, 2009
By PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
105 articles 5 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make grape juice, then watch everyone wonder how you did it!


I tell you everything
Yet you know nothing
I can choose my words
But you never pry
You never will desert me
And yet you can betray me
I tell you my emotions
But you have none
I cry out to you verbally
But you don’t wrap me in your arms
And yet you are my friend
At the same time my enemy
My strength
And my weakness
No matter what
My dear diary

The author's comments:
A girl's best friend is her diary: until her brother gets hold of it!

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tor10jax GOLD said...
on Sep. 21 2009 at 4:11 pm
tor10jax GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
10 articles 0 photos 144 comments
I really like this poem, especially the ending. The only word I'd get rid of or change is "verbally" besides that, great job!

Keep writing!

on Jun. 17 2009 at 11:19 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

Wow the ending caught me by surprise but i loved it!

on Jun. 12 2009 at 8:17 pm
pinksage33 BRONZE, Woodstock, New York
4 articles 1 photo 211 comments
great poem!!!

amyxu said...
on Jun. 4 2009 at 7:04 pm
I loved it. A few tips, though: in the line "I cry out verbally" the word "verbally" can be removed, because it is redundant. If someone "cries out" it's going to be verbal. Also, the comparison "I can choose my words but you never pry" did not seem different enough to contrast. Perhaps change "I can choose my words" to something more friend-specific...like "I can tell you everything." Anyway, good job!

on Jun. 4 2009 at 5:26 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Oh goodness! This is the first time I read a poem once, and totally got the full meaning of. I really like that about your piece. Great job!


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