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     As far as the gypsy’s eye can see

As low as the clouds that touch the trees

The blades of grass, the dying leaves

Love consumes endlessly

Fluttering of the moth’s gentle wings

The woman in the woods that will never sing

A frozen pond in the middle of a dream

Love endures as it seems

Touching all with gentle limbs

Singing a melody of compelling hymns

Curing men that drip with sins

Our journey starts where love begins




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hotty said...
Jan. 30 at 2:40 pm:

uh i kind of dont get this poem i mean like really you titled it loved one but i have to admitt it i am kinda jealous cuz i cant write that good you lucky

 
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girlthing said...
Jan. 21 at 6:58 am:

deserves five stars! =)

 
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TremendousVIP said...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 8:37 am:

Very interesting! I really enjoyed reading this. Good job! please consider checking my work out as well!

 
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AnythingButOrdinary said...
Aug. 21, 2011 at 9:53 pm:

the best ive read today

 
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natashajeanne1021 said...
Sept. 24, 2010 at 10:28 pm:

totally loved this! keep writing! =)

 
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TheCreativeChristian said...
Sept. 24, 2010 at 9:47 pm:

FANTASTIC!!!

 
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Heartless911 said...
Sept. 24, 2010 at 9:21 am:

Truely impressive i must say

I can read it all day!!!

 

 
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soccerismylife said...
May 15, 2010 at 11:38 pm:

great poem. its beautiful and has a certain grace, wonderful

 
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CountryGothicVIP said...
Apr. 23, 2010 at 1:37 pm:

Ummmm...it is good and the rhyme and wording is lovely, however the pattern of a limerick is AABBA. Be it as it may, pretty poem.

 
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MsChels101 said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 12:54 pm:

This is flippin amazing ( : I loved it, You are such a good limerick writer-er ( : Haha
FANTASTICCC ( :

 
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akbird said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 4:34 pm:

ummmmm.....w-O-w!!! the amazing truth in this is great

 
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Colorful4u said...
Jan. 8, 2010 at 2:13 pm:

I love this poem. It's wonderful wonderful wonderful!

 
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savinGrace said...
Oct. 13, 2009 at 9:19 pm:

Wonderful poem!:)

 
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jmc.13VIP said...
Sept. 15, 2009 at 9:20 pm:

This poem is exceptional! It utterly grasps the reader, pulling them into the inner and mysterious workings of love. Fantastic. I'd give you a standing ovation if I could.

 
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Schubster said...
Jun. 20, 2009 at 11:15 pm:

Wow, great poem. Usually rhyming takes away from the meaning of the poem, but this is an exceptional case. Awesome imagery, too. :)

 
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pearbear said...
Mar. 4, 2009 at 12:38 am:

i love this website really helps kids use expression without feeling presured

 
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