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By Brian C., Abington, MA
Photo credit: Christine S., Grinnell, IA
     As far as the gypsy’s eye can see

As low as the clouds that touch the trees

The blades of grass, the dying leaves

Love consumes endlessly

Fluttering of the moth’s gentle wings

The woman in the woods that will never sing

A frozen pond in the middle of a dream

Love endures as it seems

Touching all with gentle limbs

Singing a melody of compelling hymns

Curing men that drip with sins

Our journey starts where love begins




This piece has been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.This piece has also been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.

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MsChels101 said...
Mar. 10 at 12:54 pm:

This is flippin amazing ( : I loved it, You are such a good limerick writer-er ( : Haha
FANTASTICCC ( :

 
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akbird said...
Feb. 21 at 4:34 pm:

ummmmm.....w-O-w!!! the amazing truth in this is great

 
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Colorful4u said...
Jan. 8 at 2:13 pm:

I love this poem. It's wonderful wonderful wonderful!

 
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savinGrace said...
Oct. 13, 2009 at 9:19 pm:

Wonderful poem!:)

 
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jmc.13 said...
Sept. 15, 2009 at 9:20 pm:

This poem is exceptional! It utterly grasps the reader, pulling them into the inner and mysterious workings of love. Fantastic. I'd give you a standing ovation if I could.

 
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Schubster said...
Jun. 20, 2009 at 11:15 pm:

Wow, great poem. Usually rhyming takes away from the meaning of the poem, but this is an exceptional case. Awesome imagery, too. :)

 
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pearbear said...
Mar. 4, 2009 at 12:38 am:

i love this website really helps kids use expression without feeling presured

 
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