I remember...

May 15, 2009
By Twilightnme SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
Twilightnme SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"You dont know what you have until its gone"


I remember when we were small and young.
I remember we use to stick out our toungs.
We played in the dirt, or got all wet.
I remember when I got my first pet.

I remember the day we camped in a tent.
I remember that time when you crawled through that vent.
And when you were scared that you might die.
I remember that day that i cried and cried.

I remember you whispering in my ear
I remember us giggling with fear.
And when we didn't want to go.
I remember we loved each other so...


The author's comments:
Hmmm... this was a tricky poem to write.

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on Jul. 31 2009 at 4:17 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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lovely poem of great memories! however, i think the line "i remember us giggling with fear" was a little short and didn't continue the flow. maybe 'quietly giggling' would be better, adding a few syllables. good poem; keep writing~ (:

on Jul. 20 2009 at 10:18 pm
Twilightnme SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"You dont know what you have until its gone"

what i that suppose to mean? yikes?

Rachel6799 said...
on May. 31 2009 at 12:48 am
Yikes.


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