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I remember when we were small and young.
I remember we use to stick out our toungs.
We played in the dirt, or got all wet.
I remember when I got my first pet.

I remember the day we camped in a tent.
I remember that time when you crawled through that vent.
And when you were scared that you might die.
I remember that day that i cried and cried.

I remember you whispering in my ear
I remember us giggling with fear.
And when we didn't want to go.
I remember we loved each other so...



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SilverDawn said...
Jul. 31, 2009 at 4:17 am:
lovely poem of great memories! however, i think the line "i remember us giggling with fear" was a little short and didn't continue the flow. maybe 'quietly giggling' would be better, adding a few syllables. good poem; keep writing~ (:
 
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Twilightnme said...
Jul. 20, 2009 at 10:18 pm:
what i that suppose to mean? yikes?
 
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Rachel6799 said...
May 31, 2009 at 12:48 am:
Yikes.
 
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