Desiree

March 29, 2009
By Alliekat BRONZE, Denver, Colorado
Alliekat BRONZE, Denver, Colorado
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Her eyes
glisten in
the moonshine,
reflecting back
the essence
of no one
other than
myself.

Her feet
make no
resonance as
they embrace
the ground,
like a
phantom in
the wind.

Her amour
and bliss
are known
by a
delicate purr
from her
lips,

because she is

a cat.
My ally,
My friend.

Desiree.



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on May. 29 2009 at 2:56 am
KICK3593 PLATINUM, Roslyn Heights, New York
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I can't say I'm too pleased with the fifth stanza. You're giving a very abrubt summarrization of some sort. The other parts are okay, but still, I'm left hanging and discontented by that fifth and sixth stanza.

on May. 28 2009 at 5:07 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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on May. 28 2009 at 3:22 pm
HisTinyDancer GOLD, Mount Olive, North Carolina
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It's really good!

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on May. 27 2009 at 9:25 pm
Seth1 BRONZE, Republic, Missouri
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