Desiree

Her eyes
glisten in
the moonshine,
reflecting back
the essence
of no one
other than
myself.

Her feet
make no
resonance as
they embrace
the ground,
like a
phantom in
the wind.

Her amour
and bliss
are known
by a
delicate purr
from her
lips,

because she is

a cat.
My ally,
My friend.

Desiree.





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KICK3593 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 29, 2009 at 2:56 am
I can't say I'm too pleased with the fifth stanza. You're giving a very abrubt summarrization of some sort. The other parts are okay, but still, I'm left hanging and discontented by that fifth and sixth stanza.
 
lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 28, 2009 at 5:07 pm
awwww...this is so beautiful!
i loved it....
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KennaDances This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 28, 2009 at 3:22 pm
It's really good!
 
BlackLeaf said...
May 27, 2009 at 9:25 pm
hey this is good!
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