Can You See Me Dying?

May 21, 2009
By albanian4lyf91 BRONZE, Rochester, New York
albanian4lyf91 BRONZE, Rochester, New York
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Can you see me dying?
In this world for me there is no hope,
I'm sick of you joking and lying,
When with this life I cannot cope.

Can you see me dying?
Because my heart is dropping to the floor,
You ripped it out of my chest,
And quickly ran out the door.

Can you see me dying?
And how anymore I'm not trying,
Don't tell me lies, I can tell you're lying,
Only your own self you're defying.

Can you see me dying?
You said you'd give me all I wanted,
But instead you took everything I had,
And stepped on it until it became dust and left.

Can you see me dying?
My life is slipping from my hands,
And when to the floor it lands,
Don't pick it up, let it just rest.

Can you see me dying?
All I worked so hard for,
You ruined and shot into space,
Until I had nothing at all left.

If you can't see me dying,
Then make the darkness go away,
And like a lonely star in the early morning sky,
In front of you eyes I will die away.

The author's comments:
I wrote this at 12:00 am because I cound not sleep and I was feeling down. Hope it touches everybody's hearts like it touched mine as I was writting it!

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WolfRider GOLD said...
on Jun. 24 2009 at 2:30 am
WolfRider GOLD, St. Paul, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow.

Oh, this is a beautiful poem! It really touched my heart. Wonderful poem! Keep writing! :D

on Jun. 9 2009 at 12:31 am
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

It definetly touched my heart. This poem is amazing! Check out some of my poems if you would.

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