May 21, 2009
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It comes unexpected
The evil of the world
Crushes and consumes many
The sails of good disappear
Behind black clouds
Of hate and evil

Only a few survive
They warn of the disaster
But the fools go ahead into the sea
Their greed and destruction catches up
And sinks their ship

Back in safety the good are ignored
They warn again and again
But no one cares
No one listens
And when a ship sinks
No one thanks them
For warning them
For caring
The fools get destroyed
And sunk
By the Kraken

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Scoroct said...
Jun. 6, 2009 at 3:09 am
how do i find comments?
SaraB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 6, 2009 at 1:06 am
You can tell the Scoroct Empire that this is really good, especilly the "no one thanks them for warning them, for caring". Good job J!
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