Another Daydream

May 21, 2009
By Stitch BRONZE, Waterbury, Connecticut
Stitch BRONZE, Waterbury, Connecticut
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We are walking along
having some real fun,
watching the ocean breathe,
with my number one.

We decide to sit down
and our eyes, they met-
the brilliant colors
of the sunset.

The ocean is clear,
clearer than a bottle,
the way it looks
is like a landscape model.

Pretty pale white sands,
the ocean clear and blue,
the hours are passing by,
it wouldn't be right without you.

Our love is growing,
faster than a roller coaster,
but I don't want to brag,
or be a big boaster.

Then I find out,
toward the end of the day,
that it was just my imagination,
one of those dreams during the day.



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Stitch BRONZE said...
on May. 27 2009 at 3:06 pm
Stitch BRONZE, Waterbury, Connecticut
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please post any comments you have on my poem because I want all the criticism I can get.


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