Left behind

May 20, 2009
By booksarelife4me SILVER, Lutherville, Maryland
booksarelife4me SILVER, Lutherville, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Forgive and Forget and Never Regret."~A old friend


What's done is done.
Time is closing in.
I will dissapear in misery.
He will stay with golden tears.
Till once more we are together again.

The author's comments:
Just some randomn thing I wrote one time.

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on Sep. 12 2009 at 9:56 pm
booksarelife4me SILVER, Lutherville, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Forgive and Forget and Never Regret."~A old friend

thanks... *grins*

Lightning93 said...
on Sep. 12 2009 at 9:31 pm
You think I've been pretending this whole time that you were my friend? 'course I do silly!

on Sep. 12 2009 at 9:27 pm
booksarelife4me SILVER, Lutherville, Maryland
6 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Forgive and Forget and Never Regret."~A old friend

on your wall?!?! *feels honored * SARA!!!!!!! *hugtackles * You do love me!

Lightning93 said...
on Sep. 12 2009 at 9:22 pm
it is =) I still have the poem you gave me for my B-day on my wall. =)

on Sep. 12 2009 at 9:20 pm
booksarelife4me SILVER, Lutherville, Maryland
6 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Forgive and Forget and Never Regret."~A old friend

aww thanks Sara gonan make me blush...

on Sep. 12 2009 at 9:19 pm
booksarelife4me SILVER, Lutherville, Maryland
6 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Forgive and Forget and Never Regret."~A old friend

thanks! for a second I was like Myself who is that?? but then the Sahara gave it away =P...I'm blabbering...I shouldn't babble...this is supposed to be a comment...*Shuts up*

Lightning93 said...
on Sep. 12 2009 at 9:16 pm
this is great girl!! but all your work is.. ^_^

Myself said...
on Sep. 12 2009 at 9:11 pm
It's reall beautiful, Sahara! short, sweet, and to the point. :)

on Sep. 12 2009 at 6:00 pm
cheyenneduhon PLATINUM, Lumberton, Texas
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Lovin it!!!!

cree8ive GOLD said...
on Jul. 12 2009 at 11:04 pm
cree8ive GOLD, Billings, Montana
16 articles 1 photo 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure." Mariane Williamson

thanks again for the comment. i like this poem, its very short and poingant. i would consider not putting periods at the end of all the sentences. it's up to you, but sometimes in poetry periods slow it down or make it choppy and you don't always need them.

on Jun. 23 2009 at 11:59 pm
Fashionista828 PLATINUM, Vienna, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
True love doesn't have a happy ending, because true love dosn't end. <3
"I am a great housekeeper: Every time I lose a man I get his house!!" ~Zsa Zsa Gabor

Hey thanks for the comment on my story. You know "Pressure" was supposed to go right into my other story "Thanksgiving......Family Style". But then I decided to seperate them. I love this poem! it's so short but sweet. Thanks bye!


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