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I'm waiting for my true love,
Everyone says he'll come.
I'm waiting for that feeling,
Tho' sometimes that seems dumb.

I wonder if I'll know,
When I've met my love true.
People say that his every manner,
Will call out to you.

They say you'll be able to tell right away,
Whether a guy is right for you.
Tho' sometimes I'm not sure,
If waiting is the right thing to do.



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sunnyhunnyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 5, 2010 at 1:56 pm:
Great job!  I've definetly thought about this a lot.  Very relatable.
 
Lost-In-Life replied...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 5:47 pm :
Thanks! It's also a topic that has crossed my mind often, that's why I wrote it. :D
 
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The~crayon~in~my~heart said...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 9:02 am:
hmmm, i like this- no waiting! ;)
 
Lost-In-Life replied...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 5:46 pm :
Yup! No waiting! That's why I wrote this, although I'm having troubles putting it into my own life.
 
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A_Dreamer said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 11:39 am:
I think everyone can relate to this. :)
Good job, keep up writing!
 
Lost-In-Life replied...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 5:45 pm :
Thanks! I wasn't so sure actually when I wrote this about how other people could relate. I thought I would be the only one so it's great to know, that I'm not alone!
 
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8PirateChick8 said...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 3:44 pm:
Wow thats a great poem and great meaning to it! Good Job...
 
Lost-In-Life replied...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 5:43 pm :
Thanks! I appreciate the comment!
 
JohnnyDeppLover123 replied...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 2:34 pm :
your are quite welcome!!! =)
 
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