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Does he really love me?
Are the rumors true?
Sometimes I'm not so sure,
If he's not just another fool.

Is this all some joke?
It's not funny if it is.
Because I truly love him,
But I don't know what he thinks of me.

I know I can't think straight,
When he passes by me.
I wonder if he feels the same,
As I do when he's near.

Am I being silly?
Just a childhood dream?
Or is this real?
I cannot tell the truth.

If only he could tell me,
I'd be at ease.
Does he really love me,
Or is it just a dream?



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jonas_chic899 said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 5:29 pm
aww beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was gooodd
 
Lost-In-Life replied...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 5:42 pm
Thanks! I appreciate the comment!
 
The~crayon~in~my~heart said...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 9:00 am
aha! now thiss one, dont change at all- i love it
 
little-miss-sunshine replied...
Mar. 27, 2010 at 11:37 am
You know what's funny? This is the one I thought had the worst fluency and word choice yet everyone seems to love it! :p
 
A_Dreamer said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 11:40 am
Amazing.
Your poems are totally awesome, I wish I could write nearly this goo!
 
Lost-In-Life replied...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 5:42 pm
You can write good! You have to have confidence in yourself!
 
Zero_K This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 5:50 pm
I love it! I'm sure ALOT of people can relate. I was drawn to this because the title reflects my own hopless romanticism. Thanks for you comment! I can say the same for your poem!
-Blessed Be!
+++ZERO+++
 
Lost-In-Life replied...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 5:41 pm
Thanks! I did choose this topic because I and many of my friends felt that way.
 
Malory_Sturling said...
Sept. 11, 2009 at 9:34 pm
OH MY GOSH! I LOVE YOUR WORK!!!! great poetry all over! =D luv it!
 
Lost-In-Life replied...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 5:40 pm
Thanks! I appreciate the comment! 
 
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