Does He Really Love Me?

May 19, 2009
By Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!


Does he really love me?
Are the rumors true?
Sometimes I'm not so sure,
If he's not just another fool.

Is this all some joke?
It's not funny if it is.
Because I truly love him,
But I don't know what he thinks of me.

I know I can't think straight,
When he passes by me.
I wonder if he feels the same,
As I do when he's near.

Am I being silly?
Just a childhood dream?
Or is this real?
I cannot tell the truth.

If only he could tell me,
I'd be at ease.
Does he really love me,
Or is it just a dream?

The author's comments:
This poem is based on my feelings but magnified quite a bit.

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on Jun. 7 2010 at 5:42 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
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It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

Thanks! I appreciate the comment!

on Jun. 7 2010 at 5:42 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
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It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

You can write good! You have to have confidence in yourself!

on Jun. 7 2010 at 5:41 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

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It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

Thanks! I did choose this topic because I and many of my friends felt that way.

on Jun. 7 2010 at 5:40 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

Thanks! I appreciate the comment! 

on Apr. 19 2010 at 5:29 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

aww beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was gooodd

on Mar. 27 2010 at 11:37 am
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

You know what's funny? This is the one I thought had the worst fluency and word choice yet everyone seems to love it! :p

on Mar. 14 2010 at 9:00 am
biggerinfinities SILVER, Superior, Colorado
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“We accept the love we think we deserve.”
― Stephen Chbosky, The Perks of Being a Wallflower

aha! now thiss one, dont change at all- i love it

on Feb. 27 2010 at 11:40 am
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
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Part of the J7X team. :)

Amazing.

Your poems are totally awesome, I wish I could write nearly this goo!

Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 5:50 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

I love it! I'm sure ALOT of people can relate. I was drawn to this because the title reflects my own hopless romanticism. Thanks for you comment! I can say the same for your poem!

-Blessed Be!

+++ZERO+++

on Sep. 11 2009 at 9:34 pm
Malory_Sturling BRONZE, Medford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Good writing can make you look at something unbelievable and doubt yourself by believing that it is real." ♥

"You can get a thousand compliments, but one failure can tear you down; don't let it."
~Malory Sturling ♥

OH MY GOSH! I LOVE YOUR WORK!!!! great poetry all over! =D luv it!




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