Goodbye... Forever

May 5, 2009
You said you would be here forever.
You lied.
You left me without saying goodbye.
I cried.
You said you would never leave,
Nothing could tear us apart.
You said I will allways stay.
You broke my heart.
I trusted you.
You broke my trust.
I loved you.
You left me in the dust.
You said I'll be back.
I knew you wouldn't.
I said goodbye forever.
You said I shouldn't.

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ShrimpyBB said...
Nov. 18, 2009 at 9:12 pm
Hey jos!! this is really deep. is it about someone? or just a random thought?
ninjababe56 said...
Jul. 2, 2009 at 9:35 pm
I'm speechless (in a good way)
xXxFallingTearsxXx said...
Jul. 2, 2009 at 4:47 am
wow, i really love this poem!!! great job, you are an amazing writer :)
JamminJos23 said...
Jun. 30, 2009 at 10:42 pm
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Joanna said...
Jun. 28, 2009 at 9:02 pm
Oh my. This is an amazing poem. I love it when people use short statements in poems! The only think I'd suggest is putting some quotation marks in the line, "You said, "I'll be back." to clarify things a wee bit. I really like this and I'd love to read more.
bobsluvr90210 said...
Jun. 28, 2009 at 3:07 am
i love ur work especially this poem. please keep writing cuz ur work is amazing!!!!!!!!!!
amyxu said...
Jun. 27, 2009 at 5:24 pm
Hey I was browsing Teen Ink and came across your poem. It's short, sweet but to the point. Nice job! :)
<3Casey<3 said...
Jun. 25, 2009 at 12:06 am
I love your pieces, they are the best! I hope you write more!
lexi10824 said...
Jun. 19, 2009 at 10:58 pm
This is an awesome piece. I think that we should be good friends and maybe I could come to soccer with you one of these times! <3 I love you..even tho I'm not sure if I know you!
lexi10824 said...
Jun. 6, 2009 at 2:14 am
Joslynn...I love this poem. It reminds me of this guy Miguel that left me to go to Mexico. :'-(. U R an awesome writer. When r u putting more on?
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