Goodbye... Forever

May 5, 2009
By JamminJos23 GOLD, Sandy, Oregon
JamminJos23 GOLD, Sandy, Oregon
11 articles 2 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what is right, even if you are standing alone.


You said you would be here forever.
You lied.
You left me without saying goodbye.
I cried.
You said you would never leave,
Nothing could tear us apart.
You said I will allways stay.
You broke my heart.
I trusted you.
You broke my trust.
I loved you.
You left me in the dust.
You said I'll be back.
I knew you wouldn't.
I said goodbye forever.
You said I shouldn't.


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on Nov. 18 2009 at 9:12 pm
ShrimpyBB SILVER, Gresham, Oregon
6 articles 5 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I was being fasitious!"

Hey jos!! this is really deep. is it about someone? or just a random thought?

ninjababe56 said...
on Jul. 2 2009 at 9:35 pm
I'm speechless (in a good way)

on Jul. 2 2009 at 4:47 am
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
12 articles 0 photos 148 comments
wow, i really love this poem!!! great job, you are an amazing writer :)

on Jun. 30 2009 at 10:42 pm
JamminJos23 GOLD, Sandy, Oregon
11 articles 2 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what is right, even if you are standing alone.

i got new stuff... check it out!!

Joanna said...
on Jun. 28 2009 at 9:02 pm
Joanna, St. Catharines, Other
0 articles 0 photos 165 comments
Oh my. This is an amazing poem. I love it when people use short statements in poems! The only think I'd suggest is putting some quotation marks in the line, "You said, "I'll be back." to clarify things a wee bit. I really like this and I'd love to read more.

on Jun. 28 2009 at 3:07 am
i love ur work especially this poem. please keep writing cuz ur work is amazing!!!!!!!!!!

amyxu said...
on Jun. 27 2009 at 5:24 pm
Hey I was browsing Teen Ink and came across your poem. It's short, sweet but to the point. Nice job! :)

<3Casey<3 said...
on Jun. 25 2009 at 12:06 am
I love your pieces, they are the best! I hope you write more!

on Jun. 19 2009 at 10:58 pm
lexi10824 PLATINUM, Portalnd, Oregon
25 articles 2 photos 69 comments
This is an awesome piece. I think that we should be good friends and maybe I could come to soccer with you one of these times! <3 I love you..even tho I'm not sure if I know you!

lexi10824 said...
on Jun. 6 2009 at 2:14 am
Joslynn...I love this poem. It reminds me of this guy Miguel that left me to go to Mexico. :'-(. U R an awesome writer. When r u putting more on?




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