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High on Love

By , Highlands Ranch, CO
The feeling sent from above
The sound of a laugh like a coo of a dove
The beautiful baby face crush
It gives you such a rush
The feeling you get when you blush
The feeling of holding their hand
It’s like walking on sand
You can barely stand
You’re giggly
You’re protected
You feel connected
You barely know where you are
You barely can contain yourself
These are the symptoms of being
High
On
Love

You’re letting go of your heart
It’s a brand new start
It’s a work of art
You feel a tug on your heart
You feel yourself shrink and grow with embarrassment and nervous





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coby said...
May 27, 2009 at 7:39 pm
the way the poems described the feeling of love was refreshing and inspiring.
 
BloodRose said...
May 25, 2009 at 6:32 pm
this poem really captures what its like to be in love and in the moment! Few ppl can put it into words so bravo!
 
Mushroom:) said...
May 25, 2009 at 12:32 am
Great poem and idea I was wondering at the end did you mean to write nervousness or what you put nervous.
 
dontworrybehappy said...
May 24, 2009 at 11:04 pm
I can totally relate!
 
lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 23, 2009 at 7:11 pm
I could relate to this feeling...tee hee...I love your poem...Please check mine out "Recovering" and "Nightmare"...
 
MariaMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 23, 2009 at 6:48 pm
Not bad.. I guess i like feeling this way too :) A type of... security that still has that danger to it.
 
Vmusic said...
May 23, 2009 at 4:20 pm
Great voice and overall great piece of work! It felt like it ended a little to early, but than again I'm not the author, you are and you know what's right for your work. Still amazing job! I loved it!
 
AnnieB. said...
May 23, 2009 at 12:08 pm
Very nice! Im glad you felt good writing this.[lol!]
 
Anupama said...
May 23, 2009 at 9:57 am
Oh my! I feel exactly the same way right this moment :)
This poem is bang on! It should be made into a song =P
 
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