High on Love

April 24, 2009
By Anonymous

The feeling sent from above
The sound of a laugh like a coo of a dove
The beautiful baby face crush
It gives you such a rush
The feeling you get when you blush
The feeling of holding their hand
It’s like walking on sand
You can barely stand
You’re giggly
You’re protected
You feel connected
You barely know where you are
You barely can contain yourself
These are the symptoms of being

You’re letting go of your heart
It’s a brand new start
It’s a work of art
You feel a tug on your heart
You feel yourself shrink and grow with embarrassment and nervous

The author's comments:
I love feeling like this!

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This article has 9 comments.

coby said...
on May. 27 2009 at 7:39 pm
the way the poems described the feeling of love was refreshing and inspiring.

on May. 25 2009 at 6:32 pm
Love_Kills_the_Blind PLATINUM, Fort Collins, Colorado
23 articles 5 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never regret anything, at one point its exactly what you wanted."

this poem really captures what its like to be in love and in the moment! Few ppl can put it into words so bravo!

on May. 25 2009 at 12:32 am
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

Great poem and idea I was wondering at the end did you mean to write nervousness or what you put nervous.

on May. 24 2009 at 11:04 pm
dontworrybehappy BRONZE, Meridian, Idaho, Idaho
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I can totally relate!

on May. 23 2009 at 7:11 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

I could relate to this feeling...tee hee...I love your poem...Please check mine out "Recovering" and "Nightmare"...

on May. 23 2009 at 6:48 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

Not bad.. I guess i like feeling this way too :) A type of... security that still has that danger to it.

on May. 23 2009 at 4:20 pm
GreyEyesBlueHair GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Develop interest in life as you see it; in people, things, literature, music - the world is so rich, simply throbbing with rich treasures, beautiful souls and interesting people. Forget yourself." Henry Miller

Great voice and overall great piece of work! It felt like it ended a little to early, but than again I'm not the author, you are and you know what's right for your work. Still amazing job! I loved it!

AnnieB. BRONZE said...
on May. 23 2009 at 12:08 pm
AnnieB. BRONZE, Kingston, Other
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Very nice! Im glad you felt good writing this.[lol!]

Anupama BRONZE said...
on May. 23 2009 at 9:57 am
Anupama BRONZE, Mumbai, Other
3 articles 3 photos 12 comments
Oh my! I feel exactly the same way right this moment :)

This poem is bang on! It should be made into a song =P

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