May 18, 2009
By angela hurst SILVER, Aurora, Colorado
angela hurst SILVER, Aurora, Colorado
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You helped me see that there is more to life then what I see,
You showed me how to care for other peoples feelings,
You changed me.
From laughs to cries, from happy to sad,
From fights to making up, from crawling to walking,
You changed me.
As knights changed to day, and day changed to knights,
As weeks change to mouths, and mouths change to years,
You changed me.
From strangers to friends, from friends to lovers.
You changed me for the better.

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Whitney GOLD said...
on May. 23 2009 at 8:48 pm
Whitney GOLD, Carlisle, Indiana
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Beautiful poem. Two thumbs up :)

on May. 23 2009 at 6:52 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

Amazing! there's a few people i know of, that this would be a great gift. You have a talent for saying your feelings/ gratitude. I can picture this on thank-u cards, mother's day cards, fathers-day cards, gifts- all sorts of things!


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