Kissing

May 18, 2009
By Emily Wark BRONZE, Sedan, Kansas
Emily Wark BRONZE, Sedan, Kansas
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lips soft and inviting
the lipgloss from my lips, smooth
the boys stare
I get nervous
Butterflies exploding in my stomach
the silence is roaring
then the kiss
Its over like a good song cut short by lips
the minty taste lingers on my lips
regret fills me like a puddle
the guilt is eating me away
my heart tears like a flimzy peice of paper
it gets sloppily sewn back together
but its still empty inside


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on May. 24 2009 at 11:05 pm
dontworrybehappy BRONZE, Meridian, Idaho, Idaho
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You might want to go over it and use spell check.

I noticed a few errors.

Like, "peice" should be piece.

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on May. 23 2009 at 10:52 pm
Emmalee SILVER, Rayville, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Life is what happens when you're busy making other plans. - John Lennon

Wow. I'm in love with this. :)

on May. 23 2009 at 10:39 pm
Xinwen PLATINUM, Brossard, Other
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Its over like a good song cut short by lips



love that line.

on May. 23 2009 at 6:55 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

sooo... u feel regret b/c the kiss really didn't mean much- the person isn't who u want? I love the wording and the vocabulary!


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