From Unanimous

May 18, 2009
By angela hurst SILVER, Aurora, Colorado
angela hurst SILVER, Aurora, Colorado
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Hedin behind a wall
Why so I tense up when you’re gone?
I’m fighting with Miss. Mine on what to do
I might be red but when you’re gone I’m blue.

Thump Thump,
Thump Thump,
Thump Thump,
Thump Thump,

When you’re sad it’s like getting oxygen poor blood
When you’re happy it’s like sending out oxygen rich blood.
Your touch is like being revived by a (it electrocutes you to bring you back to life)
Your smile your hugs your voice all helps me live on.

Thump Thump,
Thump Thump,
I live on because o you,
Thump Thump,
Thump Thump,

If it wasn’t for you who will help me keep my beating broom beating?
Yet you feel like I don’t love you
Only if you can see that I love you with every once of energy I have.
What do I have to do to get it through to you, What?

Thump, Thump,
Please help me help you,
Help me.

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Emmalee SILVER said...
on May. 23 2009 at 10:55 pm
Emmalee SILVER, Rayville, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Life is what happens when you're busy making other plans. - John Lennon

I love it when I read poetry and I can tell that it came directly from emotion. None of the... "just let me rhyme this". I like this. You meant it.

on May. 23 2009 at 7:00 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

Interesting.. I like it.

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