May 17, 2009
When I am swimming, cheering people hope, that I my speedy competition leads. My heart is beating really fast, when I touch the wall I know I've earned, and sublime is mine!

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FreedomIsMyVirtue said...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 12:03 am
This should have been in stanza and lines form, not paragraph.

Looks like you enjoy swimming! I want to too. :))) But I don't know how to swim :(((
AdeleFan replied...
Aug. 21, 2011 at 5:52 pm
ya my computer hates me!!!!!!!!! lol. im a swim teacher; its not that hard to swim, really.
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