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Hate and violence
Pour out from the mouth
Like hailstones.

He savagely denounces them
And swears death
On them!

His hot-summer mind
Slowly melts the snow,
On his threats, until
A deafening bang
Quells his soul!

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Zane C. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 9, 2009 at 12:50 am
Would somebody please comment on my work? I would appreciate it if anybody does.
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