Four Walls

May 19, 2009
The four walls.
Enclose us from the world.
Can’t be that straight line.
Because they want you curled.

Speak out!
Like to think I try
No! Speak in
Closed down my thoughts
Sigh...

Why walk?
When you can run.
Stop the clock
They said your done.

Listen to them.
When spoken to.
Nod quietly.
Do what they want you to do

I can’t take it..
Watch the rest fake it.
Don’t think I’m going to make it..
The four walls.





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Jennifer S. said...
Sept. 26, 2009 at 11:51 pm
That's really good. :) I like it.
 
Like*Whoa!!! This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 16, 2009 at 3:59 pm
good job:) some parts of it seem just a tad bit...cliche? idk....i like it though <3
 
Jay_neff_err said...
May 23, 2009 at 7:29 pm
thanks lol. :]
 
Fangz said...
May 22, 2009 at 1:14 pm
Nice idea. The rhythm was a bit too awkward for my taste, though.
 
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