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My Gentle Friend

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I found you in the forest,
With a kind and gentle friend.
You were holding onto a branch,
That you tried to bend.

I showed you to my town,
Which I knew that you would like.
I wanted you to see a crown
With a very pointy spike.

We wre together until you left,
And it was very day.
But than you came back again,
Because I was being bad.

You taught me how it should be.
And I knew at last,
That you were aa gentle friend,
From the past





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KenKen said...
May 16, 2010 at 12:22 pm
I like it,good work!
 
Dax533 said...
May 23, 2009 at 8:49 pm
same as
animallover
 
animallover said...
May 21, 2009 at 8:05 pm
I like it. It has a strong menaing. If I can make a suggestion , it could have been a bit more descriptive with feelings. When I read it I did not feel anything. I did not feel happy, love, or sad. I'm sure your friend appreciates it. Great work, keep it up!
 
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