I Guess

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Bolts of lightning caress the sky
Their partner's sonic boom attacks

waking dreams
I lie awake, tossing and turning
thinking, feeling nothing
Except my own heartbeat
Wishing it was joined with another
My Juliet's Romeo
My love's duet
He pays me no mind, no sense
"Just Friends," he says.
I say, "I guess."





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jenbennett411 said...
May 30, 2009 at 6:35 pm
This is a very impressive poem, Sharra. I look forward to reading more of your work. I hope you get published!
 
Shanny said...
May 29, 2009 at 7:32 pm
Sharra omg your published. Such a good poem i love it. NO make some more.
 
Mrs. A said...
May 28, 2009 at 11:41 am
Nice job Sharra- I like your use of imagery in particular, you create a sense of place and mood that will linger with the reader. Way to go!
 
Sean K. said...
May 26, 2009 at 9:23 pm
Great poem, you are very talented and imaginative.
 
neely61 said...
May 25, 2009 at 4:49 am
Very nice. Hope to see more.
 
mkennedy10 said...
May 25, 2009 at 12:59 am
LOVE this poem! Very deep for a teenage. Good use of symbolism.
 
nana said...
May 25, 2009 at 12:42 am
I am very impressed by this author's work. I would like to see the poem published and hope she continues to write.
 
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