I Guess

May 18, 2009
By Sharra Neely BRONZE, Medford, New Jersey
Sharra Neely BRONZE, Medford, New Jersey
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Bolts of lightning caress the sky
Their partner's sonic boom attacks

waking dreams
I lie awake, tossing and turning
thinking, feeling nothing
Except my own heartbeat
Wishing it was joined with another
My Juliet's Romeo
My love's duet
He pays me no mind, no sense
"Just Friends," he says.
I say, "I guess."


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This article has 7 comments.


on May. 30 2009 at 6:35 pm
This is a very impressive poem, Sharra. I look forward to reading more of your work. I hope you get published!

Shanny said...
on May. 29 2009 at 7:32 pm
Sharra omg your published. Such a good poem i love it. NO make some more.

Mrs. A said...
on May. 28 2009 at 11:41 am
Nice job Sharra- I like your use of imagery in particular, you create a sense of place and mood that will linger with the reader. Way to go!

Sean K. said...
on May. 26 2009 at 9:23 pm
Great poem, you are very talented and imaginative.

neely61 said...
on May. 25 2009 at 4:49 am
Very nice. Hope to see more.

mkennedy10 said...
on May. 25 2009 at 12:59 am
LOVE this poem! Very deep for a teenage. Good use of symbolism.

nana said...
on May. 25 2009 at 12:42 am
I am very impressed by this author's work. I would like to see the poem published and hope she continues to write.




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