Pain Without You!

May 18, 2009
My heart is full of sorrow,
My soul engulfed in pain.
My lungs fill with water,
Ever since that sad, sad day,
You left,
I cried,
Can’t believe you left my side,
What will I do?
Without you,
To hold me in these times,
Please come back,
I miss you much,
Help me now,
Let’s do lunch,
Just come back,
We’ll go from there,
Please help dad,
I love you,
I swear.

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AsIAm This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 13, 2010 at 7:10 pm
Holy.... wow.... umm.... just WOW.  This really was amazing!  It was so well written I could FEEL her pain!  Wow!!!
Cam12 said...
Jan. 23, 2010 at 9:59 pm
I love doing this! It is so fun and i love to write! thanks for the posts ppl!
Jun. 16, 2009 at 6:21 pm
<3 it!
Abbie replied...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 10:21 pm
I loveeeee it!!!!
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