Pain Without You!

May 18, 2009
By Caitlyn_ilovesoftball GOLD, Douds, Iowa
Caitlyn_ilovesoftball GOLD, Douds, Iowa
15 articles 9 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hello Cat-i-lynn Mill-ard-o," -friends
"Stop saying that!! My name ain't Cat-i-lynn Mill-ard-o!!" -Me
"Okay, fine, Hello Cat."-friends
(GRRRRR)
----Also----
"You a turtle on steroids!"-friends
"Hahaha, I know" -ME


My heart is full of sorrow,
My soul engulfed in pain.
My lungs fill with water,
Ever since that sad, sad day,
You left,
I cried,
Can’t believe you left my side,
What will I do?
Without you,
To hold me in these times,
Please come back,
I miss you much,
Help me now,
Let’s do lunch,
Just come back,
We’ll go from there,
Please help dad,
I love you,
I swear.

The author's comments:
This is not what happen in real life. I just like to write different sorts of poetry

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AsIAm PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 13 2010 at 7:10 pm
AsIAm PLATINUM, Somewhere, North Carolina
48 articles 3 photos 608 comments

Favorite Quote:
"According to some, heroic deaths are admirable things. (Generally those who don't have to do it. Politicians and writers spring to mind.) I've never been convinced by this argument, mainly because, no matter how cool, stylish, composed, unflappable, manly, or defiant you are, at the end of the day you're also dead. Which is a little too permanent for my liking." — Jonathan Stroud (Ptolemy's Gate)

Holy.... wow.... umm.... just WOW.  This really was amazing!  It was so well written I could FEEL her pain!  Wow!!!

on Jan. 23 2010 at 9:59 pm
Caitlyn_ilovesoftball GOLD, Douds, Iowa
15 articles 9 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hello Cat-i-lynn Mill-ard-o," -friends
"Stop saying that!! My name ain't Cat-i-lynn Mill-ard-o!!" -Me
"Okay, fine, Hello Cat."-friends
(GRRRRR)
----Also----
"You a turtle on steroids!"-friends
"Hahaha, I know" -ME

I love doing this! It is so fun and i love to write! thanks for the posts ppl!

on Sep. 5 2009 at 10:21 pm
AbbieLeigh GOLD, Keosauqua, Iowa
13 articles 7 photos 25 comments
I loveeeee it!!!!

on Jun. 16 2009 at 6:21 pm
<3 it!


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