confused

May 18, 2009
By ceeceesoshy BRONZE, Hollis, New York
ceeceesoshy BRONZE, Hollis, New York
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Confused is white
It smells burnt paper
It taste like sushi (eww)
It sounds like walking in a quiet room full of people

It feels like putting your feet in a river full of blood
It looks like the ending of Selena
Confused is swimming away from a shark not knowing if you are going to escape.


The author's comments:
this work was really fun to do. my teacher told us to do a poetry about how we are feeling.
she put a chart on the board which said
a feeling is choose a color
it smells.....
it taste......
it sounds.....

it feels......
it looks .....
a feeling meteaphor
and we had to fill it out

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on Jun. 6 2009 at 4:13 am
ceeceesoshy BRONZE, Hollis, New York
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everyone that reads it can you plz comment its my first time and i want to lnow what you think.




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