Neon High

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Don’t stop now
Falling forward
Note to note
Inch by inch
From first to last
Falling fast
All stuck in my...head

Restless how
Sinking further
Useless in this world
Don’t give a care
I’m run out and oh so bare…

Crippled making, hours breaking
Making the time
Of what’s left…

Don’t stop.
I know it’s useless but give it just one more chance…
At last…

My mind is f***ed up,
Time now to suck up
All the world as words before…

It doesn’t matter anymore
My dreams…
My dreams…





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Gena M. said...
May 19, 2009 at 8:42 pm
note*- i put myself out of my own shoes and write of others
 
KICK3593 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 19, 2009 at 7:07 pm
it's a good poem, but you seem rather pessimistic here, as the character has lkittle revelation and is hardly resolved except by giving up.
If I'm interpreting wrong, please say so.
 
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