leages apart

May 14, 2009
i feel your heart beating so desperatly,

if it could im sure that it would flee,

straiter than an arrow into me,

and one would our hearts soon be,

but our hearts must remain caged,

at least until weve gone on and aged,

so we can be absolutly sure that this is it,

that in stone our author has it writ,

with no twists that would break our heart,

and nothing that would give us a false start,

but even if we were a thousand leages apart,

our love would shine like metal never to part.

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May 25, 2009 at 9:12 pm
LOVE IT!!! This is a beautiful poem, written so well, it flows and the rhymes fit really well, absolutely amazing! You have created a masterpiece!
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Mar. 27, 2010 at 5:10 pm

once more, thanks for the comment, i agree with that, but it could have flowed a little better


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