when your not with me

May 14, 2009
By marissa GOLD, New Castle, Pennsylvania
marissa GOLD, New Castle, Pennsylvania
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when your not with me i'm not complete, its like looking at the sky and seeing stars but no moon, its like having a body but no heart, its like a bright sky and no sun. since you've been around i have been complete. theres so many words to describe how much i truly love you. the truth is i think i am woried about time. i keep thinking that i should cherish my time its like the clock could stop ticking at any second, or the hour glass will run out of sand and the time i have with you will be all gone. every second, minute, hour, and day i spend with you is a memory i tied in a bag that i wont let go of even if my life depended on it. every memory means the world to me. my world isnt the same to me when your not in it. it takes the meaning; the reason to even have one. with out you this world isnt anything to me.

The author's comments:
this is a piece about someone who recently left my life and my own little world and its different with him gone...

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