The Burning Feeling In My Heart

May 14, 2009
By writer2b PLATINUM, Montville, New Jersey
writer2b PLATINUM, Montville, New Jersey
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I was going to give you my whole heart, luckily I did not, I only gave you half. The fury that you caused me to have started a fiery tornado. It twists and turns, and burns my soul. Every time I think of you it takes another part away from me. It burns like the core of the earth, like the sun as it beams out, like and unidentified object burning up in earth’s atmosphere. Every time I see you it burns stronger crushing what I have left to keep me alive. Soon the fiery tornado will take my soul and send me to an enhanced place. When I die all that will be left is this fiery tornado.

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on May. 23 2009 at 4:38 pm
StarrixSunshine SILVER, East Killingly, Connecticut
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I can not wait to read your piece either!

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