Love?

May 13, 2009
By Tyler Kirby BRONZE, Parker, Colorado
Tyler Kirby BRONZE, Parker, Colorado
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Why are you with him,
if you say you still love me?
How could you find someone
new so fast, when
you said you would love me forever?

Why is it all right for you
to find someone new, but
it’s not for me?
Why have I still thought about you
at least once a day since
the day we broke up?

How could you yell at me
and expect me not to be mad?
Why did you pretend to care about
our breakup but then forget about
it in a couple of days?

Why do you come to me
when things get rough between
you and your new boyfriend?
Why did you make me feel bad
about the most smallest of things?

How could you expect to be
the only priority in my life?
Why do I even take the time to
question you?


The author's comments:
I wrote this a little while after my girlfriend, of almost two years, and I broke up.

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on May. 4 2010 at 11:13 pm
LegendTitan30 GOLD, Parker, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Anything is possible once you set your mind to it"

Please write more. I want to read them :)

on May. 4 2010 at 11:10 pm
LegendTitan30 GOLD, Parker, Colorado
11 articles 2 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Anything is possible once you set your mind to it"

This poem makes me want to write like you! You deserve better than this. I hope everything is working out. You truly have a career in Poetry, I hope you will persue poetry :)

g8rman26 said...
on Dec. 19 2009 at 1:18 am
thank you so much! I really appreciate it!

on Dec. 18 2009 at 11:36 pm
This is a wonderful heartfelt poem. I am very sorry what happened between you and your girlfriend. I think strongly you can have a career in poetry. Your an amazing poet continue on with your great taste in writing.

I Wish I Could Be Like You :)


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