The most greatest feelings cannot be spoken,
The spoken cannot be touch,
And the touched cannot be felt,
With one exception to all....

the feeling, the words of-

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unearthlyhaphazard said...
Jul. 16, 2009 at 5:39 pm
Aw. I think it's sweet. Just one suggestion: The first line, make it either most great, or just greatest because otherwise, it isn't gramatically correct. Unless you wanted it that. Which also adds a new dimension to the poem.
trangh_64 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 1:28 am
I did that on purpose but thank you so much :D
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