May 12, 2009
The most greatest feelings cannot be spoken,
The spoken cannot be touch,
And the touched cannot be felt,
With one exception to all....

the feeling, the words of-

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unearthlyhaphazard said...
Jul. 16, 2009 at 5:39 pm
Aw. I think it's sweet. Just one suggestion: The first line, make it either most great, or just greatest because otherwise, it isn't gramatically correct. Unless you wanted it that. Which also adds a new dimension to the poem.
trangh_64 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 1:28 am
I did that on purpose but thank you so much :D
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