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The oak tree is over me
My chevy truck that can see.
The blue birds soaring in the sky,
my hair is flying in my eyes.

My shoes are off, and in my hands,
the sun is burning over the land.
I take a sip of lemonade,
and eat a sandwich I have made.

I look across the green valley, and then I see my best friend Callie.
We frolic and play for the rest of the day,
I forgot that she has went away.

I weep in pain, with the tears that stain.
I wake from the dream, so close it seems.
All of this I can't obtain,
what such memories, I contain...




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Joyful_angel said...
Dec. 16, 2009 at 9:01 pm:
i really like this poem!!! u definetly have talent!!!
 
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supakewl#1 said...
May 20, 2009 at 2:53 am:
Nice. :) :) (: (:
 
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KassidyLeigh said...
May 18, 2009 at 10:36 pm:
This is really cute and painful at the same time. It makes ytou feel both at the same time. Really cool! Check out 11:11 Memories~
 
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writer.on.the.loose This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 17, 2009 at 6:11 pm:
That's really good! great description it really gives me a great mental picture.
 
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Heidi This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 17, 2009 at 2:26 am:
:) Awe, I really like this. The imagery makes it come alive!
 
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kaura G. said...
May 16, 2009 at 11:23 pm:
you write well. its good
 
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MariaMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 16, 2009 at 2:50 am:
Wow- this is amazing! Sad but good. All the rhyming throws me off at first but it ends up pulling together all the pain and hurt helping the reader to feel it much more. Wonderful.
 
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Twilightnme said...
May 15, 2009 at 11:51 pm:
Wow, its amazing jkjk
 
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