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The Rose

May 12, 2009
By Greek311 PLATINUM, New City, New York
Greek311 PLATINUM, New City, New York
33 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Cold to the bone,
Like stone.
I shake.
The concrete,
Beneath my feet.
I walk, and excrete, the odor of death.
The city surrounding,
While the clouds seem to linger,
Head down, nose frozen,
Every immovable finger gasping,
For the little heat I possess.

Garden beds draped with snow.
As the inches grow,
Extinguishing every life it touches.
Luscious now diminished.

I glance to see a rose.
Tiny and withering,
But belittling.
Despite its burgundy color,
Its posture so profound.
Mounded like the snow is its will.
Like a water mill, never stopping.
I see not one leaf dropping.
And for once, the cold does not affect me.
Staring, nearly glaring at the greenery,
Could it be so bold?
Withstanding the weather,
That could sever,
Nearly any endeavor,
With a quick, numbing breeze.

I rid the lack of self determination.
Now engulfed with inspiration,
I continue my walk on the hard, cold surface.
And like a dream, I pursue,
With an upbeat stride.
And a rose forever more on my mind.

The author's comments:
Hey, I'm Austin I live in NY and plan on being a writer. I have two brothers, love to read, and do crew. I love poetry and could do it all day. There are many things in life that i question yet not in a sinister fashion. Inspire me...

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on May. 21 2009 at 11:18 pm
Greek311 PLATINUM, New City, New York
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Thank you all so much for your kind words. I appreciate that someone is noticing my poems.

bethy said...
on May. 21 2009 at 11:00 pm
These poems are on first reading incredible and thought-provoking. I need to reread them to absorb, but they are the work of a very talented poet/writer. Thanks for posting them.

on May. 20 2009 at 3:00 am
supakewl#1 BRONZE, Fairway, Kansas
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Good luck on becoming the writer you have always dreamed of becoming. I plan on being a poetry and scary story writer when I grow up :) Comment on my work anytime ya want to!!!!!

on May. 19 2009 at 2:31 am
RheaD.Ravenfinger BRONZE, Juneau, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
1 Corinthians 13:4-8

Your name reminds me of an old crush I had. Your poem is truelly beautiful honestly. Five stars. I think you are a pretty nice guy. :)