What I Say

May 12, 2009
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As the world revolves around its axis,
All the people will fall into their graves.
What in the world could have caused this?
Could it be the way everyone behaves?

Our pollution will bring us to our deaths,
We will continue wasting all the gas,
Until it vacuums our last breath,
Destroying the entire human class.

Buried in the ground will be our new home,
But now the Earth’s crust will cover our souls.
Once populated now an empty dome,
Now all the dirt will fill the vacant holes.

As the Earth continues to fade away,
Will anyone listen to what I say?

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DinosoarJen This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 17, 2009 at 7:49 pm
Really really good. I liked it a lot.
Did you write it as a sonnet? I think it's the right pattern but I'm not sure.
Tell me what you think of my stuff?
I really like your style.
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