What I Say

May 12, 2009
By TJ Curtis BRONZE, Mill Village, Pennsylvania
TJ Curtis BRONZE, Mill Village, Pennsylvania
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As the world revolves around its axis,
All the people will fall into their graves.
What in the world could have caused this?
Could it be the way everyone behaves?

Our pollution will bring us to our deaths,
We will continue wasting all the gas,
Until it vacuums our last breath,
Destroying the entire human class.

Buried in the ground will be our new home,
But now the Earth’s crust will cover our souls.
Once populated now an empty dome,
Now all the dirt will fill the vacant holes.

As the Earth continues to fade away,
Will anyone listen to what I say?

The author's comments:
With the way we use out natural resources and pollute the world, the world won't be much of a place to live after we demolish it.

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on May. 17 2009 at 7:49 pm
DinosoarJen DIAMOND, Scottsville, New York
86 articles 0 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just another casualty.
It's sad but true.
And even dead I'm still ahead
of most of you.


Really really good. I liked it a lot.

Did you write it as a sonnet? I think it's the right pattern but I'm not sure.

Tell me what you think of my stuff?

I really like your style.


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