To my Adonis

May 12, 2009
By Megan Bennett BRONZE, Conroe, Texas
Megan Bennett BRONZE, Conroe, Texas
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To my dear Adonis
my heart longs for the,
but like the wind in the background
you'll never notis me.
With that perfect body,
a true work of art.
Your eyes of cold slate,
warms up my broken heart.
But your heart is with another;
an angel I hope,
cus when I look at you
you feel my up with hope.
You mean the stars to me,
shinging up my dark night.
But for as long as she has you
my love must take flight.
My dear Adonis you are my Edward,
My Daisy, my Sweeny Todd,
Your hold over me
is like your a god.
Goodbye for now Adonis;
both out side and in,
maybe one day we could have
the life that could have been.

The author's comments:
I was inspired to write this in English when my teacher was going over some vocab. One of the words was Adonis. I could only think of one person who was my Adonis. The boy at lunch who ive had a crush on for months. I asked him out once and he told me he had a girl firend then laughed at me behind my back.

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