The Moment I Met You

May 11, 2009
By TaylorTravesty BRONZE, Lakeway, Texas
TaylorTravesty BRONZE, Lakeway, Texas
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The moment I met you,
My eyes saw no one more.
The night that I saw you,
I knew I’d never loved before.

I loved you right then and there,
You know you weren’t the same.
You know that you never cared,
But I won’t let you take all the blame:

I’m not that dreamy,
And I’m not that sweet.
I’m not well-liked,
And I’m easily beat…
By some other girl,
More lovely and divine.
While I sit back,
And let our “for never” love decline.

You’ll never know,
What I have done for you.
You never suspected;
You never had a clue…
That my love for you,
Caused such mental damage.
And that, what I did for you,
Was far passed savage.

But enough of the sad;
It’s grown quite old.
Let us embrace the good,
And push the bad into the cold.

I loved you then,
I love you now.
I said it then,
I’ll say it now.
I go to sleep with you in mind;
My dreams and you are intertwined.

The author's comments:
My name is Taylor. I first started writing quite a while ago, immensely inspired by my dad's pride when I showed him my literature. Now, I'm inspired by the heartbreak and hurt pressed on me by my first "love."

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Anjo! SILVER said...
on May. 17 2009 at 5:38 am
Anjo! SILVER, Roseburg, Oregon
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Wow.. this is SOOOO amazing. Keep writing. wow.




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