Invisable I stand...

May 11, 2009
By Michael Bazan BRONZE, La Habra, California
Michael Bazan BRONZE, La Habra, California
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Invisable I stand...
Invisable I stand oblivious of happiness.
Invisable I stand inefficient of love.
Invisable I stand enclosed by anger.
Invisable I stand blind of hope.
Invisable I stand...

The author's comments:
lately ive been feeling mixed feelings about my life...
i hope any readers that feel the same about life can benefit from this article in where they'll know their not the only one.

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olvera616 said...
on May. 20 2009 at 1:38 pm
I remember filling the same way at one point in my life. This poem is the perfect picture of my youth. Thanks for the memory.

on May. 18 2009 at 10:25 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

Interesting. I like it. And you know, at this age i think everyone feels mixed feelings about their life... and you captured that feeling perfectly in my opinion


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