Invisable I stand...

May 11, 2009
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Invisable I stand...
Invisable I stand oblivious of happiness.
Invisable I stand inefficient of love.
Invisable I stand enclosed by anger.
Invisable I stand blind of hope.
Invisable I stand...

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xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 18, 2009 at 10:25 pm
Interesting. I like it. And you know, at this age i think everyone feels mixed feelings about their life... and you captured that feeling perfectly in my opinion
olvera616 said...
May 20, 2009 at 1:38 pm
I remember filling the same way at one point in my life. This poem is the perfect picture of my youth. Thanks for the memory.
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