Pretending

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Pretend
That I don't love you
Pretending
I don't care
Pretended
I didn't need you
Forget
That you weren't there.





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Marlyre This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 10:18 pm
very strong, the tense of the word really does the trick and the end ties it all together... read some of mine?
 
Electricity This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 7, 2009 at 3:27 pm
I feel sadness. ~_~ makes me think of a boy-jerk. I love your stuff! Keep writing!
 
sallyloco said...
Jun. 24, 2009 at 2:53 am
wow. Sounds like me. Very awesome short poem!
 
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