All the things I had to say

May 11, 2009
By BiaLove BRONZE, Plano, Texas
BiaLove BRONZE, Plano, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"love is like ghosts, many have talked about but few have seen"

Every minute of my day
Here are all the things I want to say

I know you don’t know how I feel when it comes to you
My only wish is to know if you feel it too
I don’t care if you don’t feel it like I do
But at least I could look back and say you knew
I need to know if what I feel is true
Before I can tell you
Sometimes I wish I knew
What this could turn into

When you look at me
All I want to do is freeze
Your presence
It puts me in ease

Everything that I’ve been writing
It’s not so all exiting
I hope when you realize
This small surprise
That you won’t tease
Because your name rhymes with………


Those were all the things I had to say
And every thing I think about
Every single day

The author's comments:
This is how I really feel about this person and if when I give it to him I really hopee that he'll feel the same way

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This article has 3 comments.

CarlosS said...
on May. 28 2009 at 3:11 am
Well Done!! Nice to see you express feelings so well!! Is really hard for many of us to do that.. you are so great.. I am so proud!!

Lois said...
on May. 27 2009 at 5:09 am
Wow, I really like the twist at the end of your poem. Nice job of expressing the questions of love and how it causes so many different feelings at one time. Good job!

JanineD said...
on May. 27 2009 at 2:08 am
That's so romantic, so innocent... You are doing a great job with your Poems. I'm proud of you and so flattered to be your mom. Keep up the good work sweetie...


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