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Your Eyes

Your Eyes trap me in silence
holding me there as a prisoner
they know that i can't fight it
So they go for my weakest spot
Your eyes are tunnels
never ending and pitch black
curving in mystery and narrowing into deception
they hint little but give nothing
Your eyes are inviting
the color of the sky before the storm
Beautiful, coloring, but very, very dangerous
the danger, though, you can't see until it's too late
Your eyes say " Come forward "
But i back up
Because knowing what i know
It's better to look away from Your eyes




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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 11:02 am:
wow this is very good! :) while i was reading it, i was almost put into a trance. i love how deep and meaningful it is :) i love it!! :) check out some of my work if you can, i would love your opinion :) keep writing my friend...5 stars!
 
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kmpoetgirl7 said...
May 19, 2009 at 11:00 pm:
i loved your poem!! Thank you so much for commenting on mine step by step. :) Great work!
 
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