The one I've Lost Or Might

May 10, 2009
By BiaLove BRONZE, Plano, Texas
BiaLove BRONZE, Plano, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"love is like ghosts, many have talked about but few have seen"

I remember the first time I looked into your eyes
I was astonished by the surprise
I don’t want to cry
But I don’t want to be the one to lie
I don’t want to say goodbye
I know we gotta go
I’m listening to my heart
I don’t wanna be apart
It’s never gonna be the right time
It’s like I’m committing a crime
You’re so close
You feel so far
What do I have to do?
To be so close
To what I want the most
I can’t wait
For some other day
Your presence overwhelms the room
But somehow you’re creating a womb
Maybe we have to talk
Yet maybe we should just walk
Do you think we know what to say?
‘Cause if you don’t
I’ll walk away
It would be better to say it’s not you it’s me
But you’ll get over me
Why can’t I make you stay?
Just one more day?
I can’t take it anymore
Open the door
I’m begging at the door
Turn on the light
Look inside
Sometimes it feels like my heart is aching
But look again at the glass breaking
I’ll admit I’ll shed a tear
It won’t happen near
I’ll get over you too
After it’s all been done
After its all been said
What will there be left to do?
The one I’ve been looking for
The one I’ve been missing
The one I’ve needed
The one I’ve …………..

The one I’ve lost

Or Might……..

The author's comments:
This was Inspired to me by someone I strongly feel that I'm in love with. It was easy to put my feelings into words because it was so strong, the feelings. In other words I truly think that I'm in love with somebody and I still haven't gotten the couradge to tell this person. Also if you know who I am, I love you.

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This article has 3 comments.

on Jun. 25 2009 at 1:34 am
i have felt this way b4. i am feeling like this now mii gf dumped mee and i can not get over her ppl tell me im attacrtive sweet girl tht i can get another gf. but its so not tht easy.... i believe tht once u truly find ur true love thrs no going back.

Lois said...
on May. 27 2009 at 5:06 am
I have felt this way too, before. Very well said!! I could relate to your feelings and fears. Great expression of feelings with your choice of words!

JanineD said...
on May. 27 2009 at 2:12 am
Very creative, well said. Your feelings are very intense for an 11 year old girl. Great Job!


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