Summer Soon

May 10, 2009
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Love is a thing,
I don’t understand,
but I get it all when I hold your hand.
When you smile my way,
my hearts here to stay,
don’t let me go,
our times running out,
weeks and days are just such small amounts.
Tell me a secret,
I'll promise to keep.
Have a little faith in me.
So much to say,
So much to do,
I don’t know where to start with you.
When your around I forget how to speak,
A passing gaze makes my knees go weak,
You know dear,
Your a special boy but my heart,
just isn’t a toy.
Look me in the eyes,
When I run away,
Chase after me and tell me your gonna to stay.





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lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 22, 2009 at 6:53 pm
This is very good. I agree with amyxu, that line somewhat throws me off a little. But it's ok. I really love this piece.
 
amyxu said...
Jun. 15, 2009 at 7:03 pm
Hey I liked this one the best so far. It's short and to the point. Um, one suggestion: the line "You know dear/Your a special boy but my heart/just isn’t a toy" is a little non-balanced, when it comes to meter and rhythm. Other than that, however, I really liked this poem! :)
 
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